We were learning about summer sounds and poem making of what we hear around us.
I found it easy to know what to make my poem about.
I found it hard get some good or interesting words that I heard a round me outside.
Next time I will make my poem more detailed.
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Kia Ora Tilly,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this poetry activity as I love reading and writing poems and summer is my favourite season!
I think your poem is awesome, you stuck to the summer theme well and what you could hear, feel and see during a summer day. Great job for including a clip of your sound, although it is quiet it sounds serene.
Could you also complete the slides and highlight all the correct sound words.
Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates