we were learning about recount writing.
I found it easy to remember a time of day that I liked.
I found it hard to only pick one time I liked.
next time I will write a little bit more detailed.
Tuesday, August 11, 2020
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Kia Ora Tilly, My name I Tori and I'm from Hornby Primary school. I like how you wrote about a really cool time in you life and I like your story. I like the way you described it a bit. Thanks for this amazing work.
ReplyDeleteYour coment is really cool thank you so much for your awsome and thoughtfull coment victoria what city do you live in at hornby primary
DeleteHello Tilly, My name is Olivia I am from Awapuni School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used flower background it looks really pretty.
I think you used really good words to decribe your favorite time of day.
Next time you could make the words have a bit more colour.
From Olivia.