We were learning about environmental poem writing.
I found it easy to describe what my leaf looked like.
I found it hard to add in descriptive words.
Next time I will write about a spiky leaf.
I found it hard to add in descriptive words.
Next time I will write about a spiky leaf.
Hi Tilly this is Tiana
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and now I'm wondering who did those little nibils.Maybe next time you should make it a little bit longer
Keep up the good work :D
From Tiana :)
Hello Tiana thank you for your awsome feedback it is some great coment and next time I might try to make it a bit longer but poems are somtimes ment to be short
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