We were learning about recount writing and I was also learning about what recrafting is.
I found it easy to remember what the fun run was like and how muddy I was.
I found it hard to spot my mistakes in my draft writing.
next time I will write a little bit more writing.
Kia ora Tilly I like the way how you said thatthe fun run was like a obstacle course, thats when I knew it did look like a obstacle course.
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Thanks for you great feedback whare I will defently check it out.
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