we were learning about Haiku poems and how they have 5 syllables on the first sentence 7 syllables on next and the last sentence 5 syllables.
I found it easy to make up the sentences to the Haiku poem.
I found it hard to get the right amount of syllables to the Haiku poem.
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Tēnā koe Tilly, my name is Elle and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteIt is so wonderful to see that you’ve been so active in posting on your blog - I’m so sorry that we missed them! I have just alerted my fellow commenters, so you should be getting lots of responses on your activities very soon!
You have done a splendid job on your summer haiku, ka pai! I really like the idea of shimmering blue water, because it sounds beautiful! You have also created such an awesome DLO. I really like your layered ocean waves, and your tasty-looking ice blocks; YUM!
I think it was great that you shared your learning in your blurb. Writing haiku poetry can be a challenge because of the limited amount of syllables. It can be hard communicating what you want to say in so few words, but you have done very well! I’m so impressed that out of the whole poem, you only managed to go one syllable over the required amount! Perhaps instead, it could be “ice blocks give me a brain freeze” instead of “giving,” because that would only be 7 syllables? But you did a great job either way!
Keep up the awesome blogging Tilly, I am thoroughly enjoying getting to read all of your posts!
Ngā mihi,
Elle (SLJ)