We were learning about writing a recount my recount was about camp kaitawa and kayaking.
I found it easy to describe my time kayaking at camp kaitawa.
I found a hard to do my editing Because I had a lot of spelling mistakes that I could not identify.
Next time I will make each paragraph about a different thing but still about kayaking Instead of carrying on the same part of kayaking in another paragraph.
Kia Ora Tilly.
ReplyDeleteI would like to congratulate you on how you had done each put each paragraphs on each own slide because if you put it all on one straight slide it would be squashed.
I also really liked your stems that you have wrote about camp kaitawa and kayaking.
I think your recount was immaculate but maybe next time you could
try to just have a few slides instead of having a lot of slides.