We were learning about environmental writing we had to make a piece of environmental writing that personifies the sun flower that mrs bava brought into class, we also had to look and feel the sun flower and describe the feeling and look as if it was a human.
I found it easy to take away the boring words such as it, and, like,and the.
I found it challenging to personifie my sunflower.
Next time I will write my sunflower writing a little bit longer and add more descriptive words instead of just taking away the boring words
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