We were learning about writing about moment in time we watched a video about a Squirrel escaping from a hungry Hawk and we chose one Animal to be one Animal I was a Squirrel.
I found it easy to fix my mistakes in my draft.
I found it hard to add lots of descriptive words.
Next time I will do lots more planing to help make more descriptive words.
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