The undersea attack!

 We were learning about personification we had to add it into our writing and we are learning about different kinds of writing. I found it easy to write in creative writing. I found it hard to add personification as well as using creative writing. Next time I will add more descriptive words.   

My lazy Saturday

 I was learning about different types of writing this time I was writing creative writing I was writing about a mystery and added a few creative things. I found it easy to add unshall or unreal things to my writing. I found it hard to add really decrypted words to my writing. Next time I will make my writing five paragraphs long.

 

The great Awapuni Fun Run

Today we were writing about the great awapuni fun run. I found it hard to use personification when I was editing and re visiting my writing. I found it easy to write about one part of the fun run not the whole day. next time I will ad personification.

The champagne pools